Bevey, I need your opinion!
Okay, so I am now ready to start writing chapter three of HJ, but I can't decide what should happen in this chapter.
1) The dog walking thing. [A lot of it would be taken directly from the old chapters one and three.]
2) Nate follows Jenna to a party that he's [obviously] not invited to. [A lot of it would be similar to the old chapter four.]
If I do option 1, I don't know what else to put in that chapter to make it longer. I guess I could just do a combination of the old chapters one and three, but then the entire chapter will only have one setting and I don't quite like that. Any other ideas for it?
However, if I do option two, there won't be much exposition and Jenna won't be as much developed before the party. And I wouldn't have much for a new chapter four. So maybe this should be chapter four.
Or a combination of the two, but then it'd be a huge chapter and all over the place.
So I'm leaning towards option one, but I need more to it. :\ Ideas, Beve, ideas?
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Remember that cover I made yesterday? "Wasted". Yeah, well, I've no idea what it'll be about, but I have characters!
Aurora "Rorrie/Roar" Holloway - MC
Ella Callahan - Not sure
Caitlyn "Lyn" Tran - Asian
I know, I know, no one cares. But now that we have a stalker, I thought this post should be slightly less personal.
[Note: In no way do I advocate less personal posts in the future. This was just BSing.]
I think you should do #1. Write a couple paragraphs on that, then switch to a scene where he's with his mom. (Or is it dad? I forgot who left.) Give a little background info on how he is with his parent(s).
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Me likey the names! Roar, Ella, and Lyn. I think Ella should be an enemy. She sounds like an antag.
Also, I don't think you should make the story about being WASTED wasted...because, well, isn't that what's expected? Besides, what are you supposed to write on that topic? EVERYBODY has already covered the cliches on that. Write about...
CHOCOLATE WASTED.
JK, I just remember that quote.
But wait.
They should literally get candy wasted. Work at a sweet shop or something. Besides, the picture looks like candy anyways.
And then one day, Roar meets this guy who hates candy and she's doggedly trying to make him think otherwise.
AND EVERY CHAPTER COULD BE A CANDY BAR/GUMMI/WHATEVER.
Okay, now that I read this over, I sound retarded. And high on candy.
Sigh.